Ivy remembers how she met Amy, and all that happened back then.
Ivy recuerda cómo conoció a Amy y todo lo que sucedió en ese tiempo.
(created based in a suggestion by drend VAYAN A VISITARLO YA!!!!)
(creado por una sugerencia de drend GO VISIT HIM NAO!!!)
this was his original comment:
"this is another character right? :D but the same bunny that jumps her(that got jumped by the cat in the shower before?)? as always, very beautiful art and strong ero scenes, but i'm getting confused of how many ppl(uhm..furries?or what's it called? :/) living in the same space. :s
i think you would gain very much storytellin-wise in adding a couple of presentation pages before(or in) this next chapter. like, when this character is saying "only have to freshen up and get dressed - unlike the other two", making another page where she is thinking about her roomates,thus explaining how many there is living in the same home.
another thought on a different matter - i liked it better before when i could scroll through the pages, instead having to click back and forth like now.:s i'm a slow reader, and often have to "get back" to the pages i already read.and that's so much easier with your previous design.. (ang gaah! now i'm feeling like a really whiny biätch - SORRY!DDD''X)
this is just my personal opinions. just thought i should share them, since i'd love to get feedback like this myself. :s KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! i'm so rooting for you!:DD you rock! "
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